guys, i would like to know anything & your most honest opinion about my beat ;p

[jamming_papu]

i just made an electronica track entitled midbreak. its available by free streaming at http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=830546

its quite simple because it is a just multi-track loops.
what am i missing?

is it nice? pwede na bang isama sa isang electronica compilation? joke. hehehe.
 

[lovecore]

ok naman bro. pretty much has structure in it. quite minimalist in approach. i somehow am just looking for an additional synth line or instrument other than the bassline and the drums.

nice work 

[jamming_papu]

ok naman bro. pretty much has structure in it. quite minimalist in approach. i somehow am just looking for an additional synth line or instrument other than the bassline and the drums.

nice work 

tnx po. same idea as i thought before. kinulang ako ng time and creativity kaya di na ko nakapag add ng other instruments.  i'll make a better one next time. 

[lovecore]

tnx po. same idea as i thought before. kinulang ako ng time and creativity kaya di na ko nakapag add ng other instruments.  i'll make a better one next time. 

actually it just sounds unfinished so instead of making a new one, make time for finishing this. that of course is just a suggestion 

[dualcoil]

keep it up bro.. its part ng music.. meron ngang ibang music d na maintindihan pero pasok parin.. why not yours.. your a creative one. hehe.. keep on jamm'n!!

[jamming_papu]

keep it up bro.. its part ng music.. meron ngang ibang music d na maintindihan pero pasok parin.. why not yours.. your a creative one. hehe.. keep on jamm'n!!

tnx.