bro, the content itself is already foreign quality, at least in my ears. Ang galing, lupet!
Some minor points I think you may want to consider:
- I find that the bass drum and the vocals are panned to the left. I don't know if that's by design, but maybe you may want to center them, and stereo image the vocals. You may also want to make the vocals louder a bit, medyo lubog ng konti
- maybe good to make the rhythm guitar a bit more stereo, and add a bit more highs. As it is ang ganda na ng tone, a bit more highs and stereo (like copy left and right then move the other by a few ms).
- not sure if it is my headphones, but it lacks a bit of bass ooompphh. (I'm using a Grado SR80). Add a bit more bass.
Yun lang I think, pero overall, I think it sounds foreign. If it was played on the radio (in which my suggestions above would not matter), it already sounds foreign. Actually maganda na yung recording ng vocals, konting lakas lang.
Just my opinion, I'm not a professional but I've recorded and mixed some commercial stuff and I listen to metalcore as well.
It's my dream to play this music, kaya lang wala na ako makasama, medyo matanda na kasi ako, glam rock, speed metal and alternative uso nung panahon ko, haha.