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Offline tam_guitar

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Critic Room
« on: November 06, 2008, 10:52:01 PM »
In this thread, we post OUR OWN self produced indie songs/albums and let it be criticized by our friends here in PhilMusic.com

RULES

1. Try to be constructive brothers and sisters  :lol:
2. Avoid personal criticism
3. Please actually listen first before typing your words of wisdom
4. You cannot post your songs without listening and posting a critic
5. Post only whole songs  :lol:

for my part...

Sayang - Tears of Raven
http://www.imeem.com/dlsa/music/DVY9LSG7/tears_of_raven_sayang/







« Last Edit: November 21, 2008, 06:31:15 PM by tam_guitar »
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Re: Critic Room
« Reply #1 on: November 16, 2008, 10:56:16 PM »
review review review!

wag na mahiya hehe
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Re: Critic Room
« Reply #2 on: November 17, 2008, 10:22:27 AM »
Did I just listen to a music genius?

Unless you would tell me that you just actually electrified A thousand Miles by Vanessa Carlton.

Honestly, the sound is cool but bland and shallow, especially the delivery, did we already stop  the transgression or transfusion of sound from Alanis and Avril to Kitchie Nadal , Yeng Constantino & Zelle? or Amy Lee to Haley Williams? and the worst...Amy Winehouse to Miley Cyrus..(disgusting and disturbing)..ok, the newest OPM trend , KC Concepcion doing a parody of her ex-flame Rico Blanco.

where are the strength and volume of the song? it sounded predictable and flat.

Just my two cents. I hope you dont mind.



« Last Edit: November 17, 2008, 01:05:50 PM by gracev15 »
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Re: Critic Room
« Reply #3 on: November 17, 2008, 10:04:09 PM »
napakinggan ko siya, nakakasawa sa tenga at sa tingin ko hindi mag ki click, just to be honest, hindi maganda yung flow ng tonal pattern.hindi dahil sa mahilig ako sa progressive rock at yan ang genre ko when it comes to music.  para sakin 1-10, 1 for effort. at saka parang hindi ko maintindihan yung lyrics nung girl. tagalog naman.

ganito nga pagkaka intindi ko sa first line nung kanta "di maintindihan.. ang nangyayari sa pinipigggg." tungkol san ba yung kanta? sa halo-halo ng chowking? bakit dahan dahan bang nadudurog yung pinipig at lumulubog sa gatas, habang nakatitig yung girl sa pinipig at maluha luha kaya siya malungkot? kaya  parang may pagka melancholy na hindi maintindihan yung song? sabagay maganda yung song kung ang tema ng kanta eh para sa commercial ng bagong labas na halo-halo sa chowking.

and since "critic room" ang nilagay mo sa thread, expect more negative comments at mga harass with constant criticism since "ciritic" ang title ng thread mo. :)
« Last Edit: November 17, 2008, 10:32:12 PM by llllllliiiiiiilllllll »
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Re: Critic Room
« Reply #4 on: November 18, 2008, 10:18:52 PM »
Na-late si Tam to react  immediately.  haha. pero wala naman sya disclaimer then that we have to be sanguine and charlatan as we judge the song now that it's taken as halohalo jingle.

llllllliiiiiiilllllll encumbered me for being more outrageously sardonic but i denounce any point to malign his work. just being honest.

Quote from: llllllliiiiiiilllllll on November 17, 2008, 10:04:09 PM
napakinggan ko siya, nakakasawa sa tenga at sa tingin ko hindi mag ki click, just to be honest, hindi maganda yung flow ng tonal pattern.hindi dahil sa mahilig ako sa progressive rock at yan ang genre ko when it comes to music.  para sakin 1-10, 1 for effort. at saka parang hindi ko maintindihan yung lyrics nung girl. tagalog naman.

ganito nga pagkaka intindi ko sa first line nung kanta "di maintindihan.. ang nangyayari sa pinipigggg." tungkol san ba yung kanta? sa halo-halo ng chowking? bakit dahan dahan bang nadudurog yung pinipig at lumulubog sa gatas, habang nakatitig yung girl sa pinipig at maluha luha kaya siya malungkot? kaya  parang may pagka melancholy na hindi maintindihan yung song? sabagay maganda yung song kung ang tema ng kanta eh para sa commercial ng bagong labas na halo-halo sa chowking.

and since "critic room" ang nilagay mo sa thread, expect more negative comments at mga harass with constant criticism since "ciritic" ang title ng thread mo. :)
« Last Edit: November 21, 2008, 06:49:18 PM by gracev15 »
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Re: Critic Room
« Reply #5 on: November 18, 2008, 10:52:00 PM »
hindi ako marunong kumilatis pero try ko na din.

i like the guitar solo. and all the guitar parts  :-)

parang may problem para sakin yung timing nung intro. pero konti lang. parang kailan ng bamboo but the second part of the intro is good.

siguro mas okay kung lilinawan yung pagkanta kasi parang "sayo" yung "sayang" sa chorus

yung tunog okay din. yung orchestra effect na may sundot sundot sa verse. usually kasi tuloy tuloy yung orchestra effect.

overall? me likey  :-D
sana makatulong
« Last Edit: November 18, 2008, 10:53:24 PM by julsam »
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Re: Critic Room
« Reply #6 on: November 21, 2008, 02:49:43 PM »
Quote from: gracev15 on November 17, 2008, 10:22:27 AM
Did I just listen to a music genius?

Unless you would tell me that you just actually electrified A thousand Miles by Vanessa Carlton.

Honestly, the sound is cool but bland and shallow, especially the delivery, did we already stop  the transgression or transfusion of sound from Alanis and Avril to Kitchie Nadal , Yeng Constantino & Zelle? or Amy Lee to Haley Williams? and the worst...Amy Winehouse to Miley Cyrus..(disgusting and disturbing)..ok, the newest OPM trend , KC Concepcion doing a parody of her ex-flame Rico Blanco.

where are the strength and volume of the song? it sounded predictable and flat.

Just my two cents. I hope you dont mind.

i agree with the volume and strength  :-( walang dynamics

Quote from: llllllliiiiiiilllllll on November 17, 2008, 10:04:09 PM
napakinggan ko siya, nakakasawa sa tenga at sa tingin ko hindi mag ki click, just to be honest, hindi maganda yung flow ng tonal pattern.hindi dahil sa mahilig ako sa progressive rock at yan ang genre ko when it comes to music.  para sakin 1-10, 1 for effort. at saka parang hindi ko maintindihan yung lyrics nung girl. tagalog naman.

ganito nga pagkaka intindi ko sa first line nung kanta "di maintindihan.. ang nangyayari sa pinipigggg." tungkol san ba yung kanta? sa halo-halo ng chowking? bakit dahan dahan bang nadudurog yung pinipig at lumulubog sa gatas, habang nakatitig yung girl sa pinipig at maluha luha kaya siya malungkot? kaya  parang may pagka melancholy na hindi maintindihan yung song? sabagay maganda yung song kung ang tema ng kanta eh para sa commercial ng bagong labas na halo-halo sa chowking.

and since "critic room" ang nilagay mo sa thread, expect more negative comments at mga harass with constant criticism since "ciritic" ang title ng thread mo. :)

pronunciation is really a prob...tsk tsk, well ganun talaga pag inuna ang "looks" keysa talent pagdating sa music.
nakilala namin vox namin sa friendster, eh maganda kaya ayun hehe...

pero nag effort talaga cia  :lol: cia din lagi gusto mag practice, i think gusto nya talaga mag banda...actually nag enroll pa cia sa center for pop music para sa voice development  :-D

Quote from: julsam on November 18, 2008, 10:52:00 PM
hindi ako marunong kumilatis pero try ko na din.

i like the guitar solo. and all the guitar parts  :-)

parang may problem para sakin yung timing nung intro. pero konti lang. parang kailan ng bamboo but the second part of the intro is good.

siguro mas okay kung lilinawan yung pagkanta kasi parang "sayo" yung "sayang" sa chorus

yung tunog okay din. yung orchestra effect na may sundot sundot sa verse. usually kasi tuloy tuloy yung orchestra effect.

overall? me likey  :-D
sana makatulong

tnx about sa guitar solos  :lol:
problema lang, lahat yata na ginamitan ng compressor nung nag edit na...hai, nawala dynamics.




salamat sa honest opinions!



sa tingin ko next song na!

post kayo ng inyo  :lol:
« Last Edit: November 21, 2008, 02:50:45 PM by tam_guitar »
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« Reply #7 on: November 21, 2008, 03:15:06 PM »
So far so good, but I suggest we set formal parameters for criticism here before this thread metamorphoses into a dissfest.
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Re: Critic Room
« Reply #8 on: November 21, 2008, 05:10:07 PM »
Quote from: Stompbox on November 21, 2008, 03:15:06 PM
So far so good, but I suggest we set formal parameters for criticism here before this thread metamorphoses into a dissfest.

Amen.

Just because you're given leeway does not mean you should be vicious. Perhaps it should be a given that if you wish to participate in this thread, you should also post something of your own? It would be interesting to see how "Peace"-able people are if they have to be as vulnerable as tam_guitar, who did post his song.


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« Reply #9 on: November 25, 2008, 03:16:57 AM »
Quote from: BassCog on November 21, 2008, 05:10:07 PM
Amen.

Just because you're given leeway does not mean you should be vicious. Perhaps it should be a given that if you wish to participate in this thread, you should also post something of your own? It would be interesting to see how "Peace"-able people are if they have to be as vulnerable as tam_guitar, who did post his song.


tnx bro!

i edited my 1st post  :lol:
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« Reply #10 on: December 18, 2008, 04:41:08 AM »
you may post your own recordings for review  :lol:
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« Reply #11 on: December 18, 2008, 11:57:33 AM »
okay, here's putting where my mouth is: our band just finished the rough demo of a new song, "I am the Storm."

it's over at http://www.myspace.com/cog. your thoughts?
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« Reply #12 on: December 27, 2008, 08:34:28 PM »
Quote from: tam_guitar on November 16, 2008, 10:56:16 PM
review review review!

wag na mahiya hehe



Alhough masyado ng typical yung lyrics/topic para sakin (too mainstream and predictable for me), honestly, I did enjoy the music.  :-D
Parang hindi bagay yung music sa tema ng lyrics.... Mas nahigitan ng music yung kanta. Oh well, that's just my opinion.
But overall, panalo!
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« Reply #13 on: June 14, 2009, 06:32:23 AM »
post your songs  :lol:

nang ma-critic!
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« Reply #15 on: June 22, 2009, 02:46:41 PM »
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