Nice... was that Wency Cornejo singing .. Alex Band or Brett Anderson..?? hahaha, too much baloney, kidding.
I listened to Invisible Chains & Maryjane.. in my opinion, words must be simple but strong so you also deliver the message where listeners can easily recall the lines or catch the story.
Good but the stanza and chorus need strength and order so the words may flow smoothly with the right choice and use of words, if you dont mind, keep rockin'..