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Title: Amateur set again, Comments and critics please! thanks!
Post by: palmmuteboi on January 03, 2009, 07:30:21 AM

Canon EOS Kiss (japanese version)+kodak colorplus 200

Flower
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h203/phatbizzle/Kampuput.jpg)
Post and Lantern
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h203/phatbizzle/Postandlanterns.jpg)
Rusty
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h203/phatbizzle/Rusty.jpg)
Empty child in me
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h203/phatbizzle/emptychildinme.jpg)
True colors
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h203/phatbizzle/iseetruecolors.jpg)
Light and leaves
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h203/phatbizzle/LightandLeaves.jpg)
Harvey
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h203/phatbizzle/harvey.jpg)
Tree1
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h203/phatbizzle/Trees-1.jpg)
Tree2
(http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h203/phatbizzle/troso.jpg)

Comments please thanks!

Title: Re: Amateur set again, Comments and critics please! thanks!
Post by: skin on January 03, 2009, 12:31:34 PM

alamin mo rule of thirds...

Title: Re: Amateur set again, Comments and critics please! thanks!
Post by: Jayson77 on January 03, 2009, 08:29:59 PM

A few more practice on composition will make your pics more interesting.
Take Skin's advice on knowing the rule of thirds.
Good luck. Hope to see more photos from you.

Title: Re: Amateur set again, Comments and critics please! thanks!
Post by: palmmuteboi on January 03, 2009, 10:53:43 PM

thank you mga sir and regarding the rule of 3rds will work on that too! thanks!

Title: Re: Amateur set again, Comments and critics please! thanks!
Post by: paranoid on January 03, 2009, 11:42:51 PM

Quote from: skin on January 03, 2009, 12:31:34 PM

alamin mo rule of thirds...

+1 to this.

I disliked the first picture kasi sobrang centered siya. AFAIK it is a big NO NO.

I like the second pic though it's pretty dark. :)

Title: Re: Amateur set again, Comments and critics please! thanks!
Post by: tronixx42 on January 04, 2009, 08:42:10 AM

ok ill give my shot, heres a my comment, The FIRST shot is centered, rule of thirds? maybe or maybe not, its not always rule of thirds in my opinion,  sometimes things need to be centered, remember that your subject is the flower right?  if you put lets say in the rule of thirds, how will the picture work? wala parin diba? There is NO dominance of your 1st subject, if you use the rule of thirds, by putting 1/3 of your subject, the 2/3 left should not distract the subject, kaya sabi nila simplify.  I think you have a nice set, ill pick yung rusty, This is my interpretation, sabi mo rusty kaya kailangan makita ng viewer na rusty, i exaggerate the color to emphasize more, i did color balance to separate the subject from the background, cloned minor scratches pero di ko na kinareer. i adjusted levels for more contrast, sharpened by unsharp mask (amt=300, rad=1, thres=2) <----- hindi laging ganito for the sake lang ng pic na to, ask for professionals pag sharpening kasi di din ko bihasa dito, i put vignetting to emphasize the subject, pero grabe lagay ko dito for the sake din ng pic na to. i did minor crop but i think i should have done more  :lol: .  :-D :-D :-D  For more punch, try to rotate this pic vertically, it will be an abstract and different (but still, its your picture and interpretation), ill call it THREE SIDES TO EVERY STORY! enjoy! :lol:

Rusty

(http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k93/tronixx42/Rusty.jpg)

Title: Re: Amateur set again, Comments and critics please! thanks!
Post by: mambo on January 04, 2009, 01:27:36 PM

its not so bad, for me. although yun nga you could play with the angles but its good and that's how you interpret one scene.

...harvey scares me though...hehe joke lang kyutnix nga e.hehe

Title: Re: Amateur set again, Comments and critics please! thanks!
Post by: consequence on January 06, 2009, 02:03:01 AM

sir noob question. what is rule of thirds?

Title: Re: Amateur set again, Comments and critics please! thanks!
Post by: palmmuteboi on January 06, 2009, 08:42:50 AM

Quote from: tronixx42 on January 04, 2009, 08:42:10 AM

ok ill give my shot, heres a my comment, The FIRST shot is centered, rule of thirds? maybe or maybe not, its not always rule of thirds in my opinion,  sometimes things need to be centered, remember that your subject is the flower right?  if you put lets say in the rule of thirds, how will the picture work? wala parin diba? There is NO dominance of your 1st subject, if you use the rule of thirds, by putting 1/3 of your subject, the 2/3 left should not distract the subject, kaya sabi nila simplify.  I think you have a nice set, ill pick yung rusty, This is my interpretation, sabi mo rusty kaya kailangan makita ng viewer na rusty, i exaggerate the color to emphasize more, i did color balance to separate the subject from the background, cloned minor scratches pero di ko na kinareer. i adjusted levels for more contrast, sharpened by unsharp mask (amt=300, rad=1, thres=2) <----- hindi laging ganito for the sake lang ng pic na to, ask for professionals pag sharpening kasi di din ko bihasa dito, i put vignetting to emphasize the subject, pero grabe lagay ko dito for the sake din ng pic na to. i did minor crop but i think i should have done more  :lol: .  :-D :-D :-D  For more punch, try to rotate this pic vertically, it will be an abstract and different (but still, its your picture and interpretation), ill call it THREE SIDES TO EVERY STORY! enjoy! :lol:

Rusty

(http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k93/tronixx42/Rusty.jpg)

sir thank you for your opinion po, and yes I do agree na di lagi rule of thirds though it does come in handy sometimes, and I like what you did with my photo, great idea po =)

Title: Re: Amateur set again, Comments and critics please! thanks!
Post by: gamelan on January 10, 2009, 12:24:37 PM

bro, paglaruan mo pa yung ilaw at angles  :-D

i think the flower pic is good  :-D

tuloy lang  8-)

Title: Re: Amateur set again, Comments and critics please! thanks!
Post by: palmmuteboi on January 10, 2009, 09:31:07 PM

Quote from: gamelan on January 10, 2009, 12:24:37 PM

bro, paglaruan mo pa yung ilaw at angles  :-D

i think the flower pic is good  :-D

tuloy lang  8-)

Thank you sir :-) ill be posting a new set soon  :-)