here's my two cents worth:
1. the recording really isn't good at all...i suggest you rerecord it in it's proper tempo
2. pay attention to the proper mix between the instrumentation and the vocals.
3.the vocalist sings the words "slurred" (kaya siguro nasabi nung isa na lasing). it's always a must that the listener must be able to decipher what you are saying. pay attention to proper diction and pronounciation
good luck ![grin :-D](http://talk.philmusic.com/Smileys/default/big_smile.png)
thanks!
sorry po sa mali maling timing, tamad talaga drummer namin, wala sa tempo, biglang bibilis, biglang babagal,... ewan ko dun, pero were still letting our drummer practice more para masanay na siya sa tamang timing, at sana ayusin nya, hehe
kasalanan kasi nung drummer namin kung bakit wala kami sa timing
![Sad :(](http://talk.philmusic.com/Smileys/default/sad.png)
amateur recording pa lang naman po yan, wala pa po sa mismong demo na gagawin namin, and were still working on our new songs, sorry & cant you see, and yung isa wala pang title
![grin :-D](http://talk.philmusic.com/Smileys/default/big_smile.png)