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Offline donmartin

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Nashville studio demo
« on: January 06, 2006, 11:52:43 AM »
Hello

I'm a newbie , so I just hope I've placed this offering in the proper section here .

I've written a non-gender country lyric .... that I've had produced in a Nashville studio in two ways (one female lead / the other male lead) .

I've included both versions on the same page at soundclick for comparision convenience ..... hope you take the time to listen and comment .      Thank you - Don


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=415204




YOU  AND  ME
©-2005-Don Martin

when you left me
you just walked away
I wanted to talk
you had nothing to say
I didn't understand
why I was treated that way
it took a year for the pain to fade

and then you called
like I was on your shelf
like you were justified
like I should blame myself
well just  because
I'm not with someone else
doesn't mean I want the plans we made

[pre-chorus]
there wasn't interest when I was asking why
it wasn't missing you that made me cry

[chorus]
(I wanted closure) … not more history
(I wanted answers) … not more fantasy
(I wanted treatment) … with more dignity
not more of you and me

[instrumental]

yeah I remembered
when we first met
it’s been the hardest thing
I've ever tried to forget
And falling  in  love
is what I most regret
I was blind but now I see

so please don't question why
your sorry won’t do
and don't be acting surprised
that I can’t forgive you
and lets not pretend
we can start something new
there will never be you and me

[pre-chorus]
there wasn't interest when I was asking why
it wasn't missing you that made me cry

[chorus]
(I wanted closure) … not more history
(I wanted answers) … not more fantasy
(I wanted treatment) … with more dignity
not more of you and me

[chorus]
(I wanted closure) … not more history
(I wanted answers) … not more fantasy
(I wanted treatment) … with more dignity
not more of you and me

not more of you and me